Cover for Summer Special Pub

[Michael Gallagher]

Hey NPDers! This is a cover for a quarterfold that will be inserted in the paper I work for - I'm thinking of submitting it for a couple of state competitions come next award season - but before I do, I'd like to get the honest feedback of a few of my peers. Please check it out and respectfully fire away. Thanks!

 

[Bill Wambeke]

I see two things. First, I'd have put the supplement information up top somewhere either at the top or tucked into one of the top corners so it's clearer what it is. Second, all of the items in the bucket have shading to give them a 3-D look while the clouds and the hot air baloon do not. That's nit picking considering that's way way more than I could ever do. It's a crapshoot trying to figure out what judges are looking for each year. Good luck.

[Michael Gallagher]

Thanks for the input, Bill. Much appreciated!