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Comment by Rachel Van Blankenship on September 29, 2009 at 10:18
The top seems a bit heavy to me with the two deep photos. I agree with Lindsey that you could have run with the shapes that people associate with tires: Circles and long, vertical tracks or something. I love the idea of the green growing OUT of the tire, but I'd like to see that a bit more. Maybe make one of the photos more dominant and insert the other in the text to break it up, so it's not so blocky. Let your shapes work together.
Comment by Lindsey Jones on September 29, 2009 at 9:55
Hmm ... I think there was an opportunity to do a really neat "circle" design here with a tire as your dominant image. Plus, I think the headline could have popped a bit more. Think ART and TIRES really big ...

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