Sports portfolio

I would love if u critique my work, im an sports designer.

Thanks.

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Permalink Reply by Tim Frank on October 27, 2011 at 7:37

I like the energy that has gone into the pages and the themes of many of the pages really draw you in. Nearly every page makes use of short-form story elements. And though some of the pages are quite busy, they seem to be pretty well organized with clear hierarchy. Some very nice work.

You may want to post one single page at a time to get more specific feedback.

Permalink Reply by Fabiola Rodriguez on October 27, 2011 at 18:19

yes thats a good idea, thanks.

Permalink Reply by George Treviranus on January 8, 2012 at 11:58

Your pages are wonderful. The only thing that bothers me and could potentially bother a reader is that on some of your pages the body text is broken up a bit too much. On the Baseball page for instance each column of copy is 2 inches apart it looks like. Keep it closer together. On some pages the copy crosses the fold, which is understandable to have more space.