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Comment by Rachel Van Blankenship on September 29, 2009 at 10:38

Nice page! I love the head. It should be a little bigger and maybe play with more crumbs to fill some of the white space. There's nothing wrong with having your story interact with your images, too - so yeah, move that story in a little more, maybe play with a smaller cookie cutting into the text on the other side or use the circle shape to add a pull-quote somewhere.

Comment by Lindsey Jones on September 29, 2009 at 10:01

CUTE! Great colors, great design, great concept. The ONLY thing I might have done differently would be to move the story closer to the cookie (and maybe a bit thinner) and cut around the crumbs. And maybe make the headline a bit bigger, moved to the right a bit. Love the blue/brown combo, though. Where did you get a cookie image that big?!